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(tanka syllable count 5-7-5-7-7-) A Brief Time

Even though the time

we spent together was brief

each moment remains

yesterdays treasures to hold

your memory will not fade.

Submitted: Thursday, August 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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  • Mike Barrett (11/24/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Quite touching - amazingly well done!

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  • Noreen Carden (11/19/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful love it i have given it a ten

  • Patricia Grantham (11/4/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    A short and sweet write Heather. Time well spent is
    better than time in years spent. Memories will linger on.

  • Harindhar Reddy (9/16/2013 7:27:00 AM)

    I am not sure up to what extent words are sweet but when u Use Heather, they taste better than cherries and berries.

  • Rekha Mandagere (8/9/2013 5:54:00 PM)

    The moments are so realistic in your artistic touch. Lovely verses.

  • Sallam Yassin (8/9/2013 2:23:00 PM)

    the life is not measurable with numbers of quantity
    but with light
    quantized energy and emotion of
    in heart /great penned piece of art

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/9/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    The quality of time together is more important than the duration. Nicely expressed.

  • Jesus James Llorico (8/9/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    A beautiful tanka, even for a few seconds, briefest of time
    it can never be forgotten and it will always leave a lasting
    memory to someone so in love. A very lovely poem.

  • David Wood (8/9/2013 5:03:00 AM)

    Very true, I can vouch for your words. A lovely write Heather.

  • Thomas A Robinson (8/9/2013 3:41:00 AM)

    The moments are as brief as your felled rose petal at the gate.
    The treasures are harbored in a vault of love
    That one day are dreams of fate
    Though the time was never a second best
    Hold tightly onto to your love
    Like the time it treasured blest.

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