The Little-Simple Words About Life Poem by adheez van der beanthz
The Little-Simple Words About Life
Fears created
to faced rather than avoided
Therefore..
fear that we create to our own
is the most frightening thing in this world
for our own, of course
Man who just realized that life is uncertain
will look for ways to get out of the situation
no matter how expensive a price to be paid
But the man who has understood about that
will accept and move forward
with the uncertainty in his life
Don't think it is impossible
if the possibility still possible
Because the real is
that you are the one who enable something
possible or impossible
in the possibility that be possible
into your life
Better affirming our self
rather than expecting the others doubts
Because their firmness no more like the empty grains
as long as you maintain the doubts in your heart
earthzcity,15062014.2105
Of course, I would greatly appreciate any input or criticism from all of you, my friends
Well, its an amazing poem..I agree that every single person must be self confident and must not let suffer his/her self-esteem.... 'fearers' die ten times before their death, so leave fears behind and step forward.Moreover, problems look for those who've fear to be chased by them :) i liked your thoughts :) hira
its really brilliant adhezz.. i really liked the way you write...
Thoughts expressed in the poem are good but English grammar has buried under the thoughts.
Dear poet, If you break the long lines with subordinate/co-ordinate clauses into two/three, it will be a good free verse poem. Without poetic nature, one cannot write even a single line. Wish you the best.
Woah pondering worth muse here. Imposible yet the possibilities eh. Nice to read u again adheez.
Thought provoking read and encouraging too! Optimistic views are expressed in this poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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it WOULD be nice if every human had confidence in herself/himself, AND was a good person, with good conduct, AND was aware of the limitations which sometimes should be accepted by an individual, AND yet was not too easily discouraged from striving for personal achievement. a very good attempt to express, in english, your thoughts. if you remind me i will try to take the time to send a message with some advice on the english you used. there certainly were a LOT of possibles and impossibles in this 'poem', just as there are in real life. thanks for sharing. bri :)