Jayne Davies

Rookie - 162 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

True Feelings - Poem by Jayne Davies

Love is a blessing,
We all need to share,
Friendship's an honour,
To have someone there,
Childhood's a memory,
We keep in our hearts,
Death is an ending,
One day we will part,
Happiness is special,
For it brings on a smile,
Hope is a dream,
To forget for a while,
Dreams are a fantasy,
In peaceful sleep,
Life is a gift,
That's ours to keep.


Comments about True Feelings by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (6/6/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    Thanks Kavya! Glad you like it (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,803 Points Kavya . (6/6/2013 1:26:00 AM)

    excellent and so neatly rhymed! the last 2 lines are so true and captivating! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (6/2/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    Thanks for the comment! So glad you like it x (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,728 Points Lorraine Colon (6/2/2013 12:01:00 AM)

    Very nice thoughts, so pleasant to read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 1, 2013


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