Valsa George

Twin Triplets. No.19 - Poem by Valsa George


Precious and priceless
But gradually weakens and withers
And opens the door to death


Dreadful and unpredictable
At once disconnecting and conjoining
And opens the door to life

Comments about Twin Triplets. No.19 by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 28,335 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/20/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    Life or death, both are mysteries, but I am afraid of life not of death. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,002 Points Savita Tyagi (4/19/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    Very nice. Few words say it all. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,925 Points Soulful Heart (4/9/2014 1:34:00 AM)

    3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,925 Points Soulful Heart (4/9/2014 1:34:00 AM)

    3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Danny Draper (4/5/2014 7:43:00 PM)

    Intricately enmeshed and interconnected. Nice write. Succinct and wise. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,441 Points Kavya . (4/1/2014 5:05:00 AM) true and so nicely put in three lines! it says all! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,602 Points Md Asadullah (3/30/2014 12:29:00 AM)

    Life of this world is temporal life, the real life is the life of the hereafter inbetween them is death, Poem is small but the message is big, thankyou :) 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 659 Points V P Mahur (3/29/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    Dear Madam,
    I would just say WAO
    Amazing words like ancient Indian Poet Bihari Lal Who filled 'saagar in the gaagar'
    and thanks fooooor your nice comments. your joke is so tickling, like an affectionate sparkling.
    Thanks a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Muhammad Ali (3/28/2014 4:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. I want to say that it is the last line in the poem which make it an extraordinary for me. Best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (3/28/2014 10:15:00 AM)

    'Death eventually opening the door to life! ....... beyond that door what is there to speak of is the concern. A streak of optimism about the ultimate exit and that of pessimism about life are however, powerfully driven home in these twin triplets. A fine write madam. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,032 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/27/2014 11:45:00 PM)

    life, death very fine, we are within.10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,078 Points Patricia Grantham (3/27/2014 1:56:00 PM)

    In order for a seed to germinate it has to be planted in
    the earth. The seed dies and opens up to a new life
    of beauty. Passed from death unto life. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,377 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/27/2014 12:51:00 PM)

    The full circle of life drawn so perfectly here!
    'At once disconnecting and conjoining
    And opens the door to life' - A glittering jewel in the crown.
    These two lines kept me thinking for a while, as to how death opens the door to life, albeit life in the eternity.
    Thanks for sharing such diamond pieces.10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,035 Points Diane Hine (3/27/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    That's the way of it - a sensible summing up. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (3/27/2014 7:21:00 AM)

    A great poem and the truth, if we have life then we have to have death. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,314 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (3/26/2014 9:52:00 AM)

    Life and death, the truth so elegantly crafted........Valsa.....succinct yet profound..........truly classic (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (3/26/2014 8:44:00 AM) this what they mean by two sides of the same coin....enjoyed this brilliant write... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (3/26/2014 3:11:00 AM)

    wisdom concised marvelously! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,067 Points Nika Mcguin (3/26/2014 2:06:00 AM)

    Life & Death, the twin revolving doors of fate(aka the circle of life?) ! A fascinating write and all together true! You've made such complex topics compact, yet dense with frightening wonder.

    ~Nika (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 26, 2014

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