|
|
 |
|
|
.... Wish I! … Live in your heart…..2709 **
|
|
|
User Rating: |
|
7.8
/10
(4
votes)
|
|
|
|
|
|
Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.
In fearless daring, to touch your hair.
The pink cheeks and locks so fair.
To reach out fingers, to those jewels.
Deep blue! Star’s and moon’s fuels.
In an audacious flair to hold your hand.
And feel as free as the merry band.
With calloused hands, but tender touch.
Need not I fear, nor even a crutch.
With valor to wipe off, those pearly tears.
Snatch away, all your consuming fears
Gallantly tell, the world, all that I feel.
Boldly our love, with a kiss to seal.
With intrepid courage, pick u up.
From fount of youth, to greedily sup.
Audaciously to lay, my heart bare.
Hopelessly entangled in cupids snare.
In rash bravado, to hold u close.
Imbibe one from each, life’s dose!
(Islamabad)
(Sep 27,2009)
**…what is just 6000 Kms!
saadat tahir
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
Comments about this poem (.... Wish I! … Live in your heart…..2709 **
by
saadat tahir
) |
|
Click here to write your
comments about this poem (.... Wish I! … Live in your heart…..2709 ** by
saadat tahir
)
 |
Kesav Easwaran
(11/9/2009 1:28:00 AM) |
Romantic transcendance, Saadat...i suppose you are ready for a 'mythical Hanuman act'... Hanuman jumped past the ocean in mission as an envoy...here a lover fuelled by the force of love!
Good work...thanks...10
|
|
|
|
Karin Anderson
(10/13/2009 6:41:00 AM) |
6000km sounds just so far away but you bridge gap with your love filled words. A romantic
and heartfelt poem...
|
|
|
|
Sonya Florentino
(10/8/2009 5:01:00 PM) |
enjoyed this bold proud love unhindered by distance...and jumping off the page! !
|
|
|
|
|
|
A .
(10/1/2009 9:54:00 AM) |
aray yeah kya aam logoon kee samagh may aana wali shairee ki han, lagta han kuch asar ho gya han... not of my comments but of ttttttt.. hehehe errrrr
: P~
|
|
|
|
Lady Grace
(9/29/2009 10:34:00 PM) |
wish i was a child
hold me in your arms
wish i was a bird
warm me with your wings....
|
|
|
|
Rehana Nazli
(9/29/2009 12:51:00 PM) |
Wish I could, just live in your heart.
The human bit and the spiritual part.
A romantic, melodic poem from the depth of your heart...what a sweet and sincere wish for your beloved 6000 km apart/away.
|
|
|
|
M A
(9/29/2009 12:11:00 PM) |
Sigh...............
|
|
|
|
JOE POEWHIT
(9/29/2009 11:00:00 AM) |
Lots of moving passions
|
|
Read all
10
comments >>
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
 |
|
People who read
saadat tahir
|
 |
|
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
