David Floren

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  • Aaron Eliad (2/8/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    I've read most of your poems, and I think they're pretty damn clever. Keep writing them.

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Best Poem of David Floren

Water Moths Don'T Rush In

Squirm in your seat and grind your teeth,
Rub your hands and set your jaw
Right when it takes you.

Snorkel through a thicket of kelp,
Churned with sand in the current
Right when it snags you.

Resume the sometimes wolf search
For the “sometime soon” cry
Right when it lurches you.

Squirm in your head and grind your now,
Rub your chin and set your course
Right when it finds you.

Swim nearer to a murky,
A maybe fish, clue
Right when it hits you.

Resume the peering and veering,
The sometimes seeming to see
The right “it” ...

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Modest Watershed

Modest watershed, these days
People haven’t yet begun
Foraging for drink.

Think yourself self-storage?
Think yourself mere curtilage
Where cobwebs sag abandoned?

Where stand your thin walls,