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Line Break Liner Notes

Rating: 4.2

Our lives, our souls – they're
Actually down here,
hard-returned.

Renown: in stasis, until
Hard line breaks
Birth it.

It's hearth, it's basis:
Down here birthed.

From stasis.
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Aaron Eliad 08 February 2008

Interesting concept how we all have the epicureal predisposition to life that we can't shake. Brilliant.

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Fred Babbin 27 January 2008

I have a hard time with some of the words as well as the way they are grouped, so it doesn't really touch me. You're trying to say something, but I don't know what.

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