David Zvekic

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  • Ronberge .. (11/9/2005 3:00:00 PM)

    No doubt about it: poetry for you is a craft, and it shows...
    Just putting in writing what you already know- that I enjoy reading your work.

    Amicalement votre,
    Ronberge..

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  • Theodora Onken (9/20/2005 10:19:00 PM)

    This is absolutely breath-takingly beautiful...you do have a way with words!
    Theodora Onken

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  • Sally Nesmith (6/20/2005 9:14:00 PM)

    I enjoyed the rhyme scheme of this poem. As said before....very melodic.
    Sincerely Sally Nesmith

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Best Poem of David Zvekic

The Lazy Poor Poet [limerick]

There once was a lazy poor poet,
But indignant she didn't quiet know it.
Just one bad review,
And her blood turned all blue,
But she carried on much prouder for it.

One star: it is plenty enough.
For the tripe, for the drivel, and cruft.
When it doesn't keep time,
Paints no image, nor rhyme -
Well no thank you; you've written enough.

You may say that this limerick's a bore -
Because you don't get metaphore,
So you'll no longer see
Any critique from me.
Cry and moan - you'll get five stars for sure!

If you think that this poem's ...

Read the full of The Lazy Poor Poet [limerick]

If I Could Fly With You

If I could fly away with you I would:
  We'd breach the sky beyond where currents flow,
  Above the highest nimbus ever stood,
  I'd fly you where all tear drops turn to snow.
  Bright stars, like fairies' dust, would trace our faces,
  Through nebulae we'd sparkle in love's sight,
  A pilgrimage for two to desp'rate places,
  Like birds we'd soar as though to touch was flight.
  O'er pearly shores we'd come to rest a while;