You've got a great fan of yours in me. I love all your poems. I may not have commented on a few of them but that's my fault because I didn't understand them. Love the way you write. Please never stop writing.
Please delet my poem, I Did Not Take My Children There, from your list poems. I submitted it and it was erroneously added to your poems. Thanks, Elke Nigro
a poet with potential in their pocket. strong in opinion and voice with objective in mind. try some free verse too
Wow, I really love your sadistic man poem. Your really good. :)
you're very good. I hope you keep it up, and don't be discouraged... I'm surprised i'm the first to comment about you.. you're a real talent.
Through the noise, through the silence,
Through melodies soft and strong,
Life hums like an endless instrumental,
And I keep moving along.
Some notes bring sadness to the surface,
Some wrap me in gentle love,
Some fill my heart with courage,
Like strength sent from above.
There are rises that lift my spirit,
And lows that test my soul,
But every step, every stumble,
Still leads me toward my goal.
Music taught me how to feel,
Life taught me how to stand,
And even when the road feels heavy,
I still move, I still withstand.
No matter how slow the journey,
No matter how far to go,
With every beat that guides my heart,
I'm stronger than I know.
For the song is not yet over,
And hope still calls my name…
Through every high and every fall,
I am still walking, just the same.
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you're very good. I hope you keep it up, and don't be discouraged... I'm surprised i'm the first to comment about you.. you're a real talent.