kay connolly Poems

Your laughter alone was enough to heal the bruises.
Missing the small things is causing me to lose it.

Hour long phone calls and meeting half-way,
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This is my first poem. This is my first piece of writing that I put any real feelings into. Feel free to criticize, I know I'm not that good, and I need it.

Retaining the thought of you standing over me at your mother’s house; no shirt, just sweat pants.
I remember telling myself I wanted to be with you forever.
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Thoughts of you control my mind every day.
Any feelings of love gone, without a word to say.

I still wait for your call, knowing it’s never going to come.
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My 2nd poem. A lot of feeling into this because I turned my life around and I'm still amazed by how I did it. I try to write poems now instead of drinking when I feel something. I love feedback, I want to become better at writing so please feel free to criticize. I promise not to write an intro on every poem.

Nobody’s choice of fate is self-brutality.
Each day another victim is blindsided by motives of immorality,
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Believing that we met because it was fate,
No thoughts considered that your love could turn to hate.
So I accepted no beliefs that my heart found displeasing,
and I neglected the fact that we met for another reason.
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