Omar Ali Sabar

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  • William Cavanagh (12/13/2008 3:11:00 AM)

    Omar;

    I do not traditionally score peoms unless I really like them. I work on the premise that nothing is perfect so the my score of 9 for Wanderlust is exceptional. As you are aware there are too, too many 10's being issued on the site.
    Your work is free verse and like absract painting, it takes less skill concerning form such as metre and syllables, however you show a very good sense of word value and placement. You have formed a good vision as you have painted the picture and your wishes very well. I applaud you! In fact I took the time to read all of your work and I like them very much. Your free verse is solid. Perhaps you might try a sonnet, kyrielle or pantoum?

    Your Amigo Honest William

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Best Poem of Omar Ali Sabar

Flags Or Rags?

Standing in abyss with two rags to my wrists
No scores settled with empty clenched fists
In this battle between 'the sense' and 'the rage'
The crescent and star and the colourful cage

I've travelled through valleys so empty and green
I've tasted the dust from the wind swirling plains
Through the drunken towns where morality weeps
To sleepy villages where normailty sleeps

In paper of one and of the other a colour
The Clink of Big Brother to the land of my Mother
The hazed orange ceiling to the clear open skies
I sit and wonder where my heart really ...

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