Omar Ali Sabar
Bellshill, Scotland


Rating: 4.8
When plundering hearts' desires
drown the reasoning mind
through marshland mires
that boat I'll find
Sail I shall to
the seas open arms
moonlight skies
and starlight charms
your breath in pulls
it into motion
a witness to
my hearts devotion
Will I reach that
realm oh so dreamed?
where you shalst be
crowned 'my queen'
Is there love
like this ever seen?
so clasped, so grasped
those unbreakable seams
two hearts joined with
the sounds of thunder
not even explosions
cleft them asunder
For I know
I will have found thee
by the light at the shoreline
I've longed to see

For someone very special, beyond the oceans, amongst the stars
Friday, November 28, 2008
H K 27 February 2009
Excellent imagery, Omar... the last four lines truly held me enchanted for quite sometime...Lovely!
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Moushumi moushumi 02 January 2009
This poem reminds me of my college days of great poets like Yeats.Thank you for sharing.
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Little Hatila ;) 25 December 2008
very nice, i really loved it....10 Hataw
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Andrew Blakemore 20 December 2008
A beautifully worded piece of verse Omar, well done, Andrew
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Wali Jamali 18 December 2008
Dear, ''Wander-Lust' is a mater piece. i don't know whether you had read any romantic poet from english literature. Sir, i feel the urge to yield oneself to the dreams of a union with beloved. It is as lovely as it needs to be on UNION. I would bit exaggerate to say - as some of people may object to my view point- that yearning is much better than what should be enjoyable in union. The true love is bit inconcievable. So, the true manifestations of dream.I feel, we have much amount of our energies invested in dreams. so, we must not bet it with union. However, Ishaque Samejo calls it - Rolak ji Diary (The diary of a wanderer) - as what you call as Wander Lust. Sir, Heard melodies are sweeter, those unheard are sweetest. [Keats] So, waiting for much more sweet thoughts.
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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008
lines mixed with love and emotions....great work...thanks for sharing....
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Sid John Gardner. 12 December 2008
My sort of poetry here Omar well done...By the way...Didn't know you were a 'Soap Dodger' Green or Blue? ... Best wishes Sid (For the uninitiated a Soap Dodger is what Edinburgh folk call their compatriots in Glasgow.) ..
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Stephanie Fiddy 11 December 2008
Truly amazing piece of work. It blew me away.10!
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Jen Shearer 08 December 2008
Wow Very very artistically written. You have talent :)
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Ridge Cahill 08 December 2008
Astounding in its simplistic beauty. A true treasure of a write.
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