Omar Ali Sabar
Bellshill, Scotland

Flags Or Rags?

Rating: 4.7
Standing in abyss with two rags to my wrists
No scores settled with empty clenched fists
In this battle between 'the sense' and 'the rage'
The crescent and star and the colourful cage

I've travelled through valleys so empty and green
I've tasted the dust from the wind swirling plains
Through the drunken towns where morality weeps
To sleepy villages where normailty sleeps

In paper of one and of the other a colour
The Clink of Big Brother to the land of my Mother
The hazed orange ceiling to the clear open skies
I sit and wonder where my heart really lies

I've broken many walls in renegadal pursuits
But the decaying lies within the roots
Hence no vigour in these twisted up-shoots
A scorn strucken tree without any fruits

I'll scavenge through wastelands of shattered dreams
To find the road middling between these extremes
I'll kindle a fire to these disparate regimes
Dry out the bitterness of patriotic streams

Seeing the world through the loops of these chains
Nothing is clear but the brutal remains
A dreamboat caught between sporadic waves
No shoreline horizons to embrace

I'll loosen these rags as the fire craves for fuel
Dwindling by the ill wind so cruel
Should I watch it dwindle and search for the knotted rope?
Or should I let it rekindle - for a chance of New Hope
Thursday, August 28, 2008
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009
spell binding! ! ! ! ! ..i cant say any more! ! ! !
0 0 Reply
Mary Rich 21 May 2009
WOW! ! ! 10+....very well written heart felt....GREAT JOB.! ! ! ! sometimes hope is the only thing left....hang on to it for dear life.....your worth it....! ! !
0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 19 December 2008
Always hope overcomes despair Torn between loyalties remain trie to yourself and all will be well
0 0 Reply
Jen Shearer 11 December 2008
I like this poem alot, because it tells a very emotional and expressive storey
0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008
a marvelloys write Omar, believe in what you believe is right and then you definitely will find the right speachless with what youe have wrote and i'll love to put it in my collection of rubies and gold...thanks 10++++++++ and A+++ rgds asif
0 0 Reply
Thufail Ahmed 06 December 2008
Omar- A splendid piece indeed! It carries along the reader, no matter what their roots. Hope to see this one in top 500.
0 0 Reply
Ridge Cahill 29 November 2008
Omar - I am speechless. A wonderful poem that fills me with many, many emotions. The words for how I feel upon this read escapes me, but rest assured, 'tis brillant in every way.
0 0 Reply
Very well written. I ike the feel of expression in each line it is well expressed!
0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008
wow......that was really deep..............well penned....will be bak for more
0 0 Reply
Maria Haugen 10 September 2008
Great! I loved it! You're really talented, keep up the great work!
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

1/28/2021 8:34:18 AM #