Omar Ali Sabar
Bellshill, Scotland
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Love Is Death

Rating: 4.5
Just because I tell you that I love you
Doesn't mean that you have to love me too
Even if i'm the first to say these words to you
Don't be compelled to say them too

Everytime I stumble, break down and cry
I hope your path is clear and your eyes dry
I travelled far to tell you this secret inside
now I can die with my heart untied
I've broken the laws of love to tell you
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Powerfully wonderful. I like this so much. EXCELLENT Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much
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Kali Abyss 09 April 2012
Definetly another favorite =)
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a well expressed poem...loved this ending..10+++ And on that day when you pass by my grave when my soul is burning inside remember it's your soul that i tried to save say a prayer for me and walk on by Just pray for me and walk on by
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Jo Le 18 January 2009
very well written omar. I liked this one :)
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 December 2008
Yes sign of true love is sacrifice.............. Good write..............
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Sid John Gardner. 20 December 2008
Nice one Omar, Seem to remember a similar one written by Robert Frost....and myself.Great theme and heart felt. Sid.
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Jo Le 19 December 2008
Thanks for commenting on my poem. I really liked this poem, very deep, and also so true sometimes. wonderfully written
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Linda Moore 13 December 2008
Very Nice writing, to love and not have it returned but still to wish the best is Love......10
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 December 2008
Well Omar, you say that Love is Death but I say ' Love is the intervening space between life and death '.
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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008
ahh i can see the pain in your lines......great work....nice ending....thanks for sharing....sebastine....
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