...... Poem by Hayley Baker

......



i have found you at last
dont leave dont go
i want your angle like voice to say its ok
i want your oh so smooth hands to brush my hair out of my face
i want your blue eyes to lock onto mine
your blonde hair to brush against my cheek
brace your self pain is at no end
life is a menace with many fools
i shall give you this rose it holds pain and love

take the rose hold it close dont prick your self though its sharp
just like life think its ok to like it and it all hurts once again
dont go mum i need you how would i live?
dont open the door close it and step away
dropp the rose forgot everthing
concentrate on what life holds........love, friends, family
you got it
all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Takel 11 May 2009

I feel you carefully select your ideas to match the lovely diction / nice write / fine theme as well. Keep going!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success