Sunday, May 10, 2009

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i have found you at last
dont leave dont go
i want your angle like voice to say its ok
i want your oh so smooth hands to brush my hair out of my face
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Hayley Baker
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Daniel Takel 11 May 2009

I feel you carefully select your ideas to match the lovely diction / nice write / fine theme as well. Keep going!

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