0014.An Empty Girl Poem by Sunset Moonshine

0014.An Empty Girl



I shed no tears,
I show no fears,
Strong as a rock,
As thick as a stone,
So empty And alone,
Depressed and Stressed,
No pain,
No gain,
Show no care,
If you dare,
You see that look in my eyes,
Do they tell a million lies
You see my wrists,
Do you see the troubles that exsist,
You see the way i dress,
And you say,
No way,
That's not my little girl,
Cause this little peral,
Is drowning in her tears,
When she shows no fears,
Strong as a rock,
As thick as a stone,
So empty and alone,
Depressed and Stressed,
No pain,
No gain,
Show no care,
If you dare,
You don't see me,
For me,
You see me,
For as other say,
Which may be lies,
But that's for you to deside,
What you think means the world,
To me,
Can't you see this,
For what it actually is,
I shead no tears,
I show no fears,
Strong as arock,
As thick as a stone,
So empty and alone,
Depressed or Stressed,
No pain,
No gain,
Show no care,
If you dare...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 24 November 2008

Reads like a pounding hammer on a nail

0 0 Reply
Anita Blake 24 November 2008

great write! i really enjoyed the read

0 0 Reply
Dennis Bergeron 20 January 2009

wow that was powerfull Nice

0 0 Reply
Young One 18 December 2008

strong as a rock. i wish i could be that way. nice work

0 0 Reply
Red Blooded Black Hearted 06 December 2008

Strong poem. I liked the feel of the words and the repetition in the versus. Great work.

0 0 Reply
Venus McHeart 01 December 2008

i really, truley lov ereading your poem it just RoCkS! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
perfect everglade 26 November 2008

wow i really like this! i enjoyed reading it! it has so much imagery in it! great job! : -)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success