008 Reading Rumi Poem by Lori Boulard

008 Reading Rumi

Rating: 5.0


sipping his words
as minutes slur
into centuries,
silence shifts
like sand
settling comfortably
in my bones
holding me down
holding me still
until I almost forget
to not
understand.
I almost forget
we are supposed
to be enemies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 04 September 2007

I REALLY like the 'moments slur into centuries' image, re Rumi, that's perfect!

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Sue Ann Simar 12 January 2007

I don't understand the 'we are supposed to be enemies' in the context of Rumi. Good verb selection in 'minutes slur into centuries'.

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Esther Leclerc 12 January 2007

Hmm, you've sparked my curiousity: I'm not acquainted with Rumi (unless I was, and forgot his name, which evidently isn't unimaginable since you almost forgot the enmity part...!) . Thanks for the graceful intro to this writer.

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Anna Russell 12 January 2007

Superb Lori, superb....'until I almost forget not to understand' - he does that to me too! A well earned 10 from me. Hugs Anna xxx

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