06 Water Poem by Athul KrishnaA

06 Water

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Water, water everywhere;
But not a single dropp to drink!

The oceans stretch wide and broad;
All over the world, full of water, never to dry up!

Lakes and rivers;
They are everywhere,

As ice in the hills, and oasis in the deserts;
As vapor in air, and as water in oceans!

Man wastes and misuses
The valuable, water!

Life won't exist without water
So do not pollute it for,

WE NEED IT TO DRINK.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 24 April 2008

Athul, great job! Here are a few corrections you might make. Water, water everywhere; But not a single (drop) to drink! The oceans stretch wide and broad; All over the world, full of water, never to dry up! Lakes and rivers; They are everywhere, As ice in the hills and oasis in the deserts; (no comma) As vapor in air and as water in oceans! (no comma) Man wastes and misuses The valuable, water! Life won't exist without water So do not pollute it for, WE NEED IT TO DRINK.

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Ben Gieske 24 April 2008

A valuable message and soon it will become even more important.

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Nkululeko Mdudu 24 April 2008

your message is that worthy of global appreciation. I for one am ready to mlisten.

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Raj Nandy 22 April 2008

A very good message ATHUL, keep writing! -Raj Nandy 22Apr08

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