a singing man
was sacrificed
by ravens
of night dreams
my silky soft desire
is lying
and denied a wish
The ravens drive this poem and its quirkiness makes it alive...word master regards
‘and denied a wish’ bottom line of poem climaxed here with a dash of abstractism Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
So elusive and suggestive. very good technique enjoyed thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A simple piece with a simple thought. Thanks for sharing such intresting work.