#10 (From, ‘what's Really Happening - In 54 Numbers’) Poem by Peter S. Quinn

#10 (From, ‘what's Really Happening - In 54 Numbers’)

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A love and hate relationship,
Will never do for me;
I must have more in my power chip,
To be or not to be.

The question is to give a try,
The feelings that we keep inside.
The goal, is to reach the sky,
And do what we consider right.

If I could answer only this:
What happened to our heart?
I wouldn't even have to wish,
That we could begin from start.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 29 May 2020

Beautifully painted expression. ..the question is to give it a try The feeling that we keep inside The goal, is to reach the sky And do what we consider right. Says every feel deep inside. ...I wouldn't even have to wish That we could begin from start. If only we could answer the question we can do this Good work Sir

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

A beautiful reflection on relationship with a touch of amazing rhyme and rhythm. Lovely piece

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Peter S. Quinn 13 June 2007

Hi Marc. This is a Showcase of the poetry of Peter S. Quinn, a widely known poet, etc. In case you don’t know who he is, please read the biography notes. Thank you. The Crew

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Marc Mannheimer 13 June 2007

Hi, Peter. A few comments about various poems. First of all, I really liked that you threw in 'to be or not to be' here. It was a nice surprise. About your poetry in another language - what language is that? And lastly - I like your short nature poems, but when I saw how many you have, I just thought - 'redundant'.

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