! ! 1 Lone Void! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! 1 Lone Void! ! !

Rating: 3.0


tears yet ruffle gleaning faster
in the reeks of lone void
may be returning bird redoubting
yet not baffled by the storm on nest

fear shelters in darkness by apprehension
shadow still hides beneath the light post
cry of hunger prongs up into silhouette
fire when flecks up by the graveyard.

Some queries seemingly unanswered
clouds baffle the truth by deception
painful voices wake tears by the eyes
heart yet resonant by the mystery of love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 18 September 2009

‘…heart yet resonant by the mystery of love ‘ Nice line and silky finish. Ten+

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 October 2008

Splendid....good one again.I love your use of vocabulary

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Thad Wilk 04 October 2008

Lovely and sad poem 1 lone void, sadly the mystery of love - goes unanswered! *10*! Great read Dr. Kar! ! Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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