1. One Poem by Anand Dixit

1. One

Rating: 4.3


I am trying to find my poetic rhythm.
Pen my flow of thoughts.
Words running through my mind,
Ideas running through my mind.
Incoherent, Scattered and disjointed

I am trying to make words and ideas one
Create a world of words, in this world of chaos
Words running from one end
Ideas running from one end
On a path of collision

Ideas and words unite, one
One, the beginning
One, the universal beginning
One, the number of the gods
One, my first poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tapas Baidya 12 September 2008

Poetry is the one and unique in the world of chaos that makes us calm and delightful. The last stanza is poetically enriched. Thanks. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, West Bengal

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Fred Babbin 01 February 2010

Very good for a first poem.

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Amanda May Moore 17 October 2008

it is nice to see what happens when words do collide :)

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Tanya Stanford 22 September 2008

If this is the first, then I can't wait to read the rest. Beautiful work.

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James B. Earley 15 September 2008

You write passionately of your first poem.....and.....interestingly.....of those....to follow!

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Anjali Sinha 12 September 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! beautiful welcome to poemhunter.com a little bit of incoherentcy- scatterredness---disjointed-- yes but by the end of the poem u have regained that poetic rhythm nice write anand +10 regards anjali plzzz do read my Olive branch.

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