Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 237 Points (Palencia-Spain)

(1) Pretense - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

Failure safe,
a hiding place,
useless beauty
in his eyes.

Hasty vacuums,
empty sounds
move everywhere.

The taste,
the break,
pretense.

It
all
does
not
make
sense.


Comments about (1) Pretense by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/14/2009 2:29:00 PM)


    philosophical truth penned beautifully!
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 10, 2009


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