(1) You Haven't Hurt Me Poem by Uriah Hamilton

(1) You Haven't Hurt Me



I've been in a positive frenzy
remembering your dark eyes
and your wet hair in the summer evening rain.

I'd like to say you haven't hurt me,
I can dust myself off and remain the same;
but why should I try to convince myself
of half truths and flagrant lies?

If goodbye and separation
were Mozart and Beethoven,
I'd be a master musician
in the London Philharmonic Orchestra.
If loneliness were a virtue, dear lady,
you've rendered me a saint.

In ancient parties I thought I long forgot,
I saw your girlfriends kiss your hands.
Now, I want nothing more than
to be one of them.

5: 14AM 11-26-2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 November 2016

A creative poem of mixed feelings, but very appealing. I like the dramatic parts in it too. Kudos for the poetic mixture of freeverseandrhyme scheme. Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest titled Ashura.

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