A Little Girl Lost Poem by Uriah Hamilton

A Little Girl Lost

Rating: 4.4

Abandoned to sadistic streets,
A school room of sullen tears,
A little girl lost beneath
A blanket of rejection and fears
Moves slowly through
The lonely night;
The effects of drugs
Are wearing off…

And dawn has no promise
Of sunlight and pleasant songs.

Duncan Wyllie 25 March 2006

But you are full of promise, your achiements are shown so well whilst studying at the University Of Life.Love Duncan

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Cecil Hickman 09 February 2006

a very amazing write with compassion and strength in your very well written words

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Pamela Davison 12 September 2005

This is a part of society people try to ignore and forget. It's wonderful to know there are writers out there who still see them. Brava!

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Alison Cassidy 03 August 2006

Uriah, This is so sad and inevitable - the downward spiral of neglect goes on down and down and down. Lonely words, sensitively portrayed. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Abigail Keller 02 June 2006

Short poem with a great impact. Amazing.

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Adeeb Alfateh 02 July 2019

The lonely night; The effects of drugs Are wearing off… great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Pamela Sinicrope 29 September 2015

...a powerful poem.......

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Cj Heck 13 August 2009

it's such a pleasure to read your work again. This is very touching, as most of your work is. It grabs the emotions, shakes them up, and allows us to feel... Excellent, as usual. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

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Jeannie Ann Clark 08 January 2008

Very good writing...and true; also, sad. 'Little One, Little Voice' is about what we see happening with children today; 'Inside Her Little World'..thank you...10 for this and probably for others of yours...

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Melvina Germain 12 August 2006

It's so hard to imagine that so many young and older women are living this reality. I know several women in this situation right now, here in Calgary, Alberta. A sad but lovely piece. Thankyou-----Melvina

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