Thursday, December 30, 2004

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Rating: 2.0

Blonde hair in pigtails
On the lawn doing cartwheels
Candyfloss and angel wings
She sits forlornly on the swings
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Yuji Baba
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Marissa Cowans 23 January 2008

This poem seems to be about teens today.Alot of teens are going through this kind of thing.

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Shane Clawson 24 October 2007

I agree with Germain, something about this poem is a keeper. I think of a memoir I read dealing with the similar topic. Keep writing!

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Elsa Brooks 16 May 2005

maybe because its good.....

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Kareem Abdulrahim 22 February 2005

I don't know why, but I really like this poem.

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