175. My Lost Dream Poem by Dipankar Sadhukhan

175. My Lost Dream

Rating: 4.7


Like the red glow of the sun
Just before twilight
My dream was lost
In the sky of emptiness
And my heart began to pulsate
Like the silent cry of sorrow.

My eyes wake day and night
And tears roll down
Silently and secretly.
My heart is helpless
Like an innocent convict
Chained in a lone cell.

Sometimes my nerves stop
To work and then I feel
As if I am between
Living and non-living thing
As a virus survives
Before attacking beings.

Not for a single hour
Not for a single day,
Not for a single month,
I've been waiting for a year
Expecting my lost dream
Coming back to me again.

By Dipankar Sadhukhan
Kolkata, India.
'My Own World', No.3.
Copyrights@December25,2014(3: 00am) .

Wednesday, October 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 20 October 2016

This is a melancholy piece, leaving the reader disturbed. We wonder, what dream you lost? Will it truly come back to you, as you hope? And we are left, even as the last note of a symphony can still be heard in the heart after the music has stopped. Nicely done, good poet.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 20 October 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your kindness... You are invited to read my poems posted recently...

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Kiran Mishra 19 October 2016

Brilliantly written.... Thanks for sharing.. 10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 21 October 2016

Thank you so much for your kind words..

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Hiroshi Satow 05 April 2017

Very good work! Liked it! !

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Manira Khan 02 November 2016

A great work deserving 10.

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Seema Devi 30 October 2016

Absolutely wonderful poem with some images.

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Last dream, written with good imagination. Nice thought.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 October 2016

Like an innocent convict/Chained in a lone cell. Two excellent lines in a poem that is full of vivid dreamy images. Worthy of the Big 10!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 27 October 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your generous words on my poem..

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