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1965-1989

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Over a period of time
The music these musicians make seem to confuse my mind
1965 the yardbirds told me “for your love I'd bring you diamond rings and things right to your door.”
I mean as a woman what more could I ask for?
But then the very next year
1966 Mick Jagger said I was under his thumb
I swear that man acted as if I were dumb
1967 the who told me they got some pictures of lily that helped them sleep at night
While women named lily were fighting for their rights
1968 I was told by Elvis himself to cut the conversation cause he wanted a little more action
I mean we women are the greatest attraction
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Scarlett Treat 10 February 2006
Hi, Victoria - I'm new to your work, Gina sent me. Like you, I want constructive comments that help me be better. So, here goes = what a blast...funny tho', it was a trip through my children's music. I'm older. The only things I saw wrong were 1) there were some sentences that did not follow through the thought from beginning to end of sentence, and 2) there were some groups that I wondered if they shouldn't be capatilized like Who and Kiss. I don't know. Then I have one other question - was Jim Morrison a she or is this a typo. On to read more now.
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Scarlett Treat 10 February 2006
Hi, Victoria - I'm new to your work, Gina sent me. Like you, I want constructive comments that help me be better. So, here goes = what a blast...funny tho', it was a trip through my children's music. I'm older. The only things I saw wrong were 1) there were some sentences that did not follow through the thought from beginning to end of sentence, and 2) there were some groups that I wondered if they shouldn't be capatilized like Who and Kiss. I don't know. Then I have one other question - was Jim Morrison a she or is this a typo. On to read more now.
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Peter Lebuhn 09 February 2006
Very Good Victoria making personal the songs. I remember the yardbirds thats funny. But how you turned into almost a story like you are telling it to me over coffee. Really Cool 10 from Peter
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