This isn't the life you wanted for both of us
it feels like we took two different paths
in which you took the wrong one and i the right one
you feel you should let me go
but at the same time you need me
i'm flying up high when your wings have been cut
and you no longer can fly
you are trapped in a dark black hole were i can not set you free, not even you
it is not my fault, it is all on you
you took this path that has set us apart.
the only thing you ask from me now is to live my life
without you for it will never be the same...
this poem is good.. sometimes one need to move out for one to move in.
well wrote you do a GOOD JOB OF GETTTING A MESSAGE ACROSS
what i like in your poetry is questuins like here too..lovely and awesome..10/10
i like it but some times u need to end a sentence hard dont give too much detail let the reader explore and feel what you are feeling. i some what modified it but idk just something This isn't the life you wanted It feels like we took two different paths In which you took the wrong one You feel you should let me go But at the same time I don’t I’m flying up high when wings you don’t have And you no longer fly You are trapped in a dark black hole where I cannot set you free It is not my fault but I wish it was You took this path that has set us apart. The only thing you ask from me now is to live my life without you For it will never be the same...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That makes a lot of sense. I really like this poem. It's so sad when two people grow apart.