Yaci Pachenco

Rookie (09/03/1991 / italy)

What Was It? - Poem by Yaci Pachenco

What was it

That the first time i saw you,
You were the only thing my eyes wanted to see.

What was it

That every time you were around me,
I felt butterflies in my stomach.

What was it

That when you talked to me,
I could feel my face go red.

What was it

That at every touch,
I felt my-self melt.

What was it

That the more time i spent with you,

That, what i was feeling was getting bigger.

What was it...


Comments about What Was It? by Yaci Pachenco

  • (1/2/2010 3:19:00 AM)


    A love letter...honest and sincere...10/10! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/30/2009 3:35:00 PM)


    It was youth my dear I remember trembling in the legs
    truthful poem thanks
    regards 'Ah youth is wasted on the young'
    Happy new year
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  • (12/29/2009 7:23:00 PM)


    A very good poem written with much tenderness and thought. Keep up the good work. Your friend in poetry Lynn (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 4:56:00 PM)


    that everytime you talk to me, am always nervous
    that am always excited to hear ur voice
    that i can see your lips speaking, saying words
    whispering ssshhhhh''what was it? ''....love this cutie cutieee poem...kittetttttttt...tmileeeeeeee
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  • (12/28/2009 10:18:00 PM)


    That when you talked to me,
    I could feel my face go red.

    What was it

    a sweet poem which is repeated questions based..making the poem interesting and rich..its a good poem..liked it 10/10
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  • (12/28/2009 4:48:00 AM)


    Wowow! ! such a heartfelt love poem...i guess love can make you feel like that ~ (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/27/2009 8:46:00 PM)


    That the more time i spent with you,

    That, what i was feeling was getting bigger.

    What was it....ya it was eternal belonging and closeness wanted by your own feeling..true onedear go for it...so nice way of putting it....10

    read mine.. miss i miss you...i miss...anywhere..butterflies around
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  • Romeo Della Valle (12/27/2009 8:44:00 PM)


    What was it? Obviously, it was love a first sight, my dear, pure love, only time will tell the rest, well penned, keep it up! you are in the right site...10+++HAPPY NEW YEAR! (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 8:29:00 PM)


    Well..that was a rehearsal for love..which is coming next. :) jus kiddin..i love this one. (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 8:18:00 PM)


    You have a very nice poem here. Indeed those questions will keep on resounding in my head. Bravo! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009



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