Daryl lyraD

23: 59

Before the night slowly disappear,
there's some stuff I wish to say,

First my feelings for you
and only you,
have been quite very true.
Quite a pity it's long overdue

It's never changed and still
the same, those feelings that
I felt for you when we first met
at your window sill.

As my sentences get long and incoherent,
I think it's best I end off now.
The 3 words so inherent,
'I love you'.

An act of precaution, I fear.
Just in case, there's no another day.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, May 30, 2011

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Comments about 23: 59 by Daryl lyraD

  • Shelly Shelly (8/27/2009 3:34:00 AM)

    love dont have any last day my friend..but you feared right..
    you feared and wrapped it in words brilliantly..
    grt..job..10 again..

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/17/2009 10:53:00 AM)

    A minute to midnight, a moment to decide, if I live on still, your love that I feel, could be the past or the last, till you wake me up in the next dawn, where you'd give me your smile and kisses.

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  • Sikta Anurakta (8/17/2009 9:55:00 AM)

    First my feelings for you
    and only you,
    have been quite very true.
    Quite a pity it's long overdue.

    Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

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  • Sikta Anurakta (8/17/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    First my feelings for you
    and only you,
    have been quite very true.
    Quite a pity it's long overdue.

    Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

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  • Sikta Anurakta (8/17/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    Dear so simple yet touching...
    keep up the good work! ! !

    Cheers,
    Sikta

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  • Frank Lambert (8/15/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    Great title to accompany your thoughts in this verse. I like the idea of a first meeting at a window sill. You should write about that. Frank

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