23: 59 Poem by Daryl lyraD

23: 59

Rating: 5.0


Before the night slowly disappear,
there's some stuff I wish to say,

First my feelings for you
and only you,
have been quite very true.
Quite a pity it's long overdue

It's never changed and still
the same, those feelings that
I felt for you when we first met
at your window sill.

As my sentences get long and incoherent,
I think it's best I end off now.
The 3 words so inherent,
'I love you'.

An act of precaution, I fear.
Just in case, there's no another day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

Great title to accompany your thoughts in this verse. I like the idea of a first meeting at a window sill. You should write about that. Frank

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Shelly Shelly 27 August 2009

love dont have any last day my friend..but you feared right.. you feared and wrapped it in words brilliantly.. grt..job..10 again..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 August 2009

A minute to midnight, a moment to decide, if I live on still, your love that I feel, could be the past or the last, till you wake me up in the next dawn, where you'd give me your smile and kisses.

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Sikta Anurakta 17 August 2009

First my feelings for you and only you, have been quite very true. Quite a pity it's long overdue. Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

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Sikta Anurakta 17 August 2009

First my feelings for you and only you, have been quite very true. Quite a pity it's long overdue. Well I loved these lines...awesome write-up

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Sikta Anurakta 17 August 2009

Dear so simple yet touching... keep up the good work! ! ! Cheers, Sikta

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