poems isn't all about rhyming.
perhaps that's all you're thinking
poetry is an expression
not very much an intention.
you're getting it all wrong
by mixing up this song,
this song of lyrical beauty
which is quite a pity
you see how forced the rhyming is,
it's not even considered poetry, (sis?) .
perhaps you should do better.
and focus on the rhythm meter
which would bring about more flow,
and deal a more lethal blow?
to the readers who would probably enjoy
reading a poem which doesn't seem so forced.
once again, poetry isn't all about rhyming.
that I must continue emphasizing.
This is quite educating, and in a wonderful style. Great flow and excellent rhyme.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is true, neither does it have to be tight in structure.