23 Fitzroy Road, Beach Boys 1

Rating: 5.0

FAT dragons spoil the
fitches, plead says
john, before i take the
beach boys away.
FAT dragons put on a
suit, wash teath, and
drive away, into his
own private hell.
PLEAD says john, before
i take the beach boys
away.
FAT dragon gets old, have
some kids, goes to work,
comes home with his hands
on fire, and repeats what
his father did to him.
PLEAD says john, before
i take the beach boys away.
FAT dragon silently flys
away...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 07 July 2006

Hi David, This one was really sad, and again I like the way you write and the emotions that are expressed in your poetry. Take care.

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DAVID...THE SAGA TAKES A TWIST...WANDERING ROADS TO ''WHOKNOWSWHERE''KEEPS THE READERS INTEREST...10 SPOT 4 TH' BEACH BOYS....'''''''''''''''FRANK

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Thank you David for ringing a bell. x

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David Gerardino 13 January 2006

THIS poem is about a friend of mine in high school, he had a thing about the beach boys music, his dad would take away his tapes/records, , , , , , , , , , , , , , and then, beat him up, keep in mind that he came from a, rich part of town, to this day i wonder if hes ok, or dead....................

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Gina Onyemaechi 13 January 2006

Gripping, mysterious...and highly disturbing. I was intrigued, David. Do it again.

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