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23 Fitzroy Road , Drop Me Deep - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

DROP me deep,
watch me twist,
and shovel all
these words on
a blank canvas.
VULTURES circle,
FOREIGN tongues
every where, a moment
full of blood, but in that
blood, is your DNA.

Comments about 23 Fitzroy Road , Drop Me Deep by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (7/6/2006 11:50:00 PM)

    Hi David, I am sure a lot of people must be following your poems. This is excellent. It like a mini series. Take care. (Report) Reply

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/2/2006 5:14:00 PM)

    GREAT WRITE, GOOD SIR! 10 4 ''91''''''''''''FRANK
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  • (10/31/2005 8:16:00 PM)

    I like your style David. Short, sweet and very succinct.10 from me. I love artists by the way. All the best Tai (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2005 10:37:00 AM)

    This is the seed of something good. Hope you add to it and create a song there. (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2005 12:45:00 AM)

    the title is that somewhere in Melbourne Australia David you seem to have grown very articulate all of a sudden perhaps you swallowed a worm when you had a shot of tequilla this morning

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  • (10/27/2005 11:55:00 PM)

    Pretty intense, David. I don't get the title though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 27, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 17, 2006

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