ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 23 (Milana Ra Ranga -023/Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 23 (Milana Ra Ranga -023/Odia Poem)

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ଆଜି ଜମା ପଦୁଟିଏ କଥା

ଆମେ ଦୁହେଁ ହୋଇପରିଚନ୍ତି,

ସେମାନଙ୍କ ପାଖ ରେ ଥିବା ଟା

ଭରୁଥିଲା ଅତୃପ୍ତି, ଅଶାନ୍ତି ।


ଆଜି ଗୋଟେ ଉପହାର ତମେ

ଦେବ, ବୋଲି ଆଶା କରୁଥିଲି,

ସେଇ ନୀଳ ଅକ୍ଷର ର ଚିଠି

ମୋ ହାତ କୁ ଦେବ ଭାବୁଥିଲି ।।



ତମ ଅକ୍ଷର ଟା ସିନା ତୁଚ୍ଛ,

ତୁମ ପାଇଁ ମାମୁଲି, ଅଧୁଲି-

ମୋ ପାଇଁ ତମର ଧୂଳି ମଳି-

ପ୍ରାଣ ଠୁ ନିଜର ଆଉ ଜୀବନ ଠୁ ବଳି ।।।

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 23 (Milana Ra Ranga -023/Odia Poem)
Wednesday, November 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life.
Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonali Parida 11 November 2017

A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive. ତମ ଅକ୍ଷର ଟା ସିନା ତୁଚ୍ଛ, ତୁମ ପାଇଁ ମାମୁଲି, ଅଧୁଲି- ମୋ ପାଇଁ ତମର ଧୂଳି ମଳି- ପ୍ରାଣ ଠୁ ନିଜର ଆଉ ଜୀବନ ଠୁ ବଳି ।।। Lovely poem shared by you. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 13 November 2017

Yes I feel it is a unique love poem. Love your sense of appreciation. Sonali.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thank you dear Sonali for your nice inspiration in the remarks.

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Sonali Parida 11 November 2017

ତମ ଅକ୍ଷର ଟା ସିନା ତୁଚ୍ଛ, ତୁମ ପାଇଁ ମାମୁଲି, ଅଧୁଲି- ମୋ ପାଇଁ ତମର ଧୂଳି ମଳି- ପ୍ରାଣ ଠୁ ନିଜର ଆଉ ଜୀବନ ଠୁ ବଳି ।। A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Lovely poem shared here sir. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 13 November 2017

Yes Sonali I feel it is a unique love poem. Love your sense of appreciation.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thank you Sonali dear for your nice inspiration in the remarks.

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D Priyanka Singh 11 November 2017

One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive. ତମ ଅକ୍ଷର ଟା ସିନା ତୁଚ୍ଛ, ତୁମ ପାଇଁ ମାମୁଲି, ଅଧୁଲି- ମୋ ପାଇଁ ତମର ଧୂଳି ମଳି- ପ୍ରାଣ ଠୁ ନିଜର ଆଉ ଜୀବନ ଠୁ ବଳି । Wow. nice poem. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 November 2017

Thank you dear Priyanka for your nice inspiration in the remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 11 November 2017

ତମ ଅକ୍ଷର ଟା ସିନା ତୁଚ୍ଛ, ତୁମ ପାଇଁ ମାମୁଲି, ଅଧୁଲି- ମୋ ପାଇଁ ତମର ଧୂଳି ମଳି- ପ୍ରାଣ ଠୁ ନିଜର ଆଉ ଜୀବନ ଠୁ ବଳି ।।। A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life. Beautiful sharing. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 13 November 2017

Yes Alina, I feel it is a unique love poem. Love your sense of appreciation.

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