Quantum Of Space You Fill Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Quantum Of Space You Fill

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So often today
You have entered me,
Like a cool summer breeze,
Through the Sun-burnt grooves.

Giggles of funny encounters
Between us, ages ago-
Knock often on my eardrums!
Are you so close-
Somewhere nearby, Inside
Somebody I talk to, interact with?

Why does my heart
Feel like sobbing the pain
Out into the sky nearby?
Why do I feel that you would
Come and fill me up as and
When I fall ill? ?

What made you nostalgic
About me and my things,
About my feelings, and
Sufferings en route to death?

I know you would simply say
That you do not know it,
The answer that I cherish for
Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives
That we have lived here on Earth.

Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2016

Over the ages! ! With the dreams of this love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks Sir for the beautiful and inspiring remarks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2016

What made you nostalgic About me and my things, About my feelings, and Sufferings en route to death? the idea of rebirth. cycles of life...... love this poem. enjoyed reading. thank you. tony

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Subhasnata Chalra 17 October 2021

Nice poem, beautiful.

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Bipasha D 18 August 2018

A beautiful poem. So much closeness and harmony in it...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 August 2018

Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Why do I feel that you would Come and fill me up as and When I fall ill? ? ...........................fabulous expression! A lovely poem! (10)

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Thank you Dillip Sir, my great friend for your appreciation and these beautiful remarks.

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Robert Murray Smith 05 May 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery.++10 Robert

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Thank you my revered Sir for your appreciation and these beautiful remarks.

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

The answer that I cherish for Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives That we have lived here on Earth. Wow, a beautiful poem crafted with so much passion.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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