Subhas Chandra Chakra

Gold Star - 64,244 Points (13 Oct 1965 / Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India)

Forgotten Kiss - Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Tears rolled down,

As I climbed up the hill.



The same hill, the stones

Large and brown

Obstructing path

As in those bygone

Summer afternoons.



There stood the tree,

That old Plum tree,

Where you tried your kisses,

The first one wet with shyness,

The next ones dipped with passion,

And above all the last one to bid…

To bid me the last good bye,

The farewell from my world

Of things shared

Roads, Beds, Beaches, Sandwiches

And the kisses

That initiated

From your foreheads

Through the lips till

They clad all your private

Zones of the soul.



Sometimes

I would have failed

To remember all these,

And even forget

That secret blue wound

On my heart,

That your kiss placed there

On that blue mist of the

Summer afternoon.



Had I not remembered

That blue sky,

That plum shade,

Those clouds

Wandering, white clouds

Crazy with what it saw

Then and there

Between us.

Topic(s) of this poem: cloud, forgotten, forgotten love, kiss, shadow

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Forgotten Kiss by Subhas Chandra Chakra

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/16/2017 4:32:00 AM)


    And what a wonderful surprise to see your poem as the poem of the day.
    My heartfelt Congratulations and so happy for you Subhas ji.
    You really deserve this honour.

    The old plump tree, the blue sky, the beaches and even the sandwiches
    makes a subtle mark in the forgotten love and kiss.
    Fabulous poem that gets my full vote.
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  • (11/16/2017 12:06:00 AM)


    Beautiful, . Such beautiful - well written poetry. A real pleasure for the reader. I was totally emerge and lost. Congratulations! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/16/2017 12:03:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Muzahidul Reza (11/15/2017 10:52:00 PM)


    Large and brown
    Obstructing path, , , , , , , , , , , , well penned, congrats and thanks for sharing the pom with us
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  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (11/15/2017 9:30:00 PM)


    Wandering, white clouds
    Crazy with what it saw
    Then and there
    Between us.
    Lovely poem shared.
    Congrats for the POTD
    (Report) Reply

    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:41:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Ranjan for the nice remarks.

  • Lopamudra Kajolika (11/15/2017 8:56:00 PM)


    A great day for me to see you on the front page today Sir, Thanks for sharing such a love lorn poem and congrats for the selection of member Poem Of The Day.
    10++
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    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:41:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Lopamudra for the nice remarks.

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/15/2017 7:19:00 PM)


    private zones of the soul, beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (11/15/2017 5:15:00 PM)


    A very happy mind dwelling tranquility. Worthy enough to carry that. Good (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2017 5:02:00 PM)


    Your words pull a reader to go through. Beautifully crafted write. (Report) Reply

  • Sabita Sahoo (11/15/2017 12:41:00 PM)


    And the kisses
    That initiated
    From your foreheads
    Through the lips till
    They clad all your private
    Zones of the soul.
    What a great love poem Sir, bathes with rich imageries.
    10+++ for the sharing and Congrats for the member POTD.
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    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:42:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Sabita for the nice remarks.

  • Anita Aparajita Das (11/15/2017 12:29:00 PM)


    Wandering, white clouds
    Crazy with what it saw
    Then and there
    Between us.
    Lovely poem shared.
    Congrats for the POTD
    (Report) Reply

    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:41:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Neetu for the nice remarks.

  • Seema Devi Sharma (11/15/2017 12:16:00 PM)


    There stood the tree,

    That old Plum tree,

    Where you tried your kisses,

    The first one wet with shyness,

    The next ones dipped with passion,

    And above all the last one to bid…

    Great poem on love and kiss, Nicely penned.
    Thanks for it.
    Congrats for being on the front page today, as member POTD.
    10++++
    (Report) Reply

    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:42:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Rini for the nice remarks.

  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (11/15/2017 12:03:00 PM)


    Congratulations sir for your selection as member poet of the day.
    Nice poem shared.10++++
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/15/2017 11:35:00 AM)


    Up the hill! ! With the the muse of a kiss! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/15/2017 11:35:00 AM)


    Up the hill! ! Withthe the muse of a kiss! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Sonali Parida (11/15/2017 11:20:00 AM)


    There stood the tree,

    That old Plum tree,

    Where you tried your kisses,

    The first one wet with shyness,

    Lovely and erotic, Congrats for being selected.
    10+++++
    (Report) Reply

    Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (11/15/2017 9:43:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Sonali for the nice remarks.

  • (11/15/2017 11:17:00 AM)


    Lovely poem of love and memories. So full of romance and tender thoughts. Congratulations on member poem place. (Report) Reply

  • Suratha Kumar Rout (11/15/2017 11:11:00 AM)


    Had I not remembered
    That blue sky,
    That plum shade,
    Those clouds

    Wandering, white clouds
    Crazy with what it saw
    Then and there
    Between us.
    Lovely poem shared.
    Congrats for the POTD]
    (Report) Reply

  • Nudershada Cabanes (11/15/2017 9:16:00 AM)


    Beautiful. Congrats on your poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2017 9:01:00 AM)


    Nice romantic poem about a love and a kiss. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on poem of the day. (Report) Reply

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