271. Gina Poem by Jaden Knight

271. Gina



I want to kick your bull- -
and burn your truth
want to stand over the flames
to get high off the fumes
not that it would work
as you only have lies
why'd it take so long to open my eyes

No I don't want to burn you alive
it's a waste of time killing
as to start you never had a life
you existed but even that's close to a lie
look at yourself and you will see why

No wonder you have no friends
your stupidity drove them all away
even the ones that held off for a while
are celebrating now that they did not stay

Now I can be safe from your noise pollution
every time you open your mouth
don't want to hear it so why don't you
just shut the hell up
do the whole world a favour
your voice is a killer not a saviour

You think I want to harm you
but you're a waste of my time
you couldn't reach my level
no matter how long you climb
maybe you'll find another and abuse their trust
but that won't ever be me bitch
coz to me you are just dust

Tuesday, June 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 June 2016

i have issues with stanza #1, but the last one is really VERY FINE. i especially enjoyed: you couldn't reach my level no matter how long you climb: and but that won't ever be me bitch coz to me you are just dust: and your rhyming. but don't ya feel SORRY for people like that? come on. just a tiny bit sorry? bri ;)

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