2my Love Poem by Lisa Bray

2my Love

Rating: 5.0


close your eyes
don't say a word
im watching you my love
you will not die
if one dies the other will follow
your killing me cant you see what ur doing?
i know what im doing please put faith in me
my love is pure as your soul'
my needs for your touch is killing me my love
the sound of your voice gives me power.
your jokes help me thought the hard ships of my life.
my memory's of you keeps me from dying
i don't trust no one else with you my love i need you to find your way home.
so i can give up my life to save yours my love
you laughter helps me fight in battle


i love you my love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjib Das 05 July 2009

Like Sydney, you cross everything. You prove that you are a genius-a genius who can make everything in love-a love -which from reality. you penned well.

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Nooruddeen Mm 24 June 2009

Lisa A very nice love poem Good flow - real good words. Rgds Nooruddeen

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close your eyes don't say a word im watching you my love you will not die.....what reassuring words from poetess.. well done....10

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Lisa Bray

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indiana, Indianapolis
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