Thursday, July 10, 2008

.3. Gone Nuts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Acorns on the woodland floor
Squirrel found with many more
Up a tree back to his house
Inside asleep a well fed mouse
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David Threadgold
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Chris Newlash 06 September 2008

hehe that was a fun poem.

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 10 July 2008

Good poem with some sort of a lesson maybe saying 'don't trespass' anyone's property. And if you do it will be a physical clash. Well penned David! Hope you write more.

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Rani Turton 10 July 2008

Lovely poem, really enjoyed it. Thank you.

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