Wednesday, October 15, 2008

.3. Shadow Monsters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the shadows lurk monsters
Who live on all our fears
They hide away from laughter
And feed upon our tears
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David Threadgold
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Threadgold I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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June Feir-Cruz 18 October 2008

Great observations on the effects of having negative feelings. Shadow Monsters appears to be like a metaphor for emotional vampires.....forgive the psycho babble....it's a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it tremendously.

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Linda Winchell 15 October 2008

Good One again Sir David! 10!

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