Thursday, October 23, 2008

.3. Tired Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Things I’ve seen through tired eyes
Some look bad its no surprise
From a distance far away
Lots were closer where they stay
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David Threadgold
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Robert Siney 24 October 2008

This is a great piece, David. I admire your ability to rhyme whilst effectively delivering emotion. Good work. Keep smiling, Robert

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Marilyn Lott 23 October 2008

I think as we get older we do see things through tired eyes. We aren't exactly shocked anymore just sad - so much ugly stuff in life as you said. Very well put, David. A '10! ' from me, my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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