Athul KrishnaA

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32 Senryu - Poem by Athul KrishnaA

Handsome, funny
Intelligent, wise
These qualities belong
To none other than me

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  • (4/13/2008 11:30:00 AM)

    Athul, while I liked your poem, I have to remind you that a haiku should contain three lines and 17 syllables, with 5 syllables in line 1,7 syllables in line 2, and 5 syllables in line 3. Haiku should also have references to nature and seasons worked around one key word usually placed strategically in the second line.

    A poem in this form that discusses one's self, sometimes in a humorous way, is called a senryu, which your poem is actually closer to.

    Keep writing! ! ! :)
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  • (4/13/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    Oh Yeah........................................ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 13, 2008

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