Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!
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Short and sweet with a great message! Congrats!
it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that
Mature thinking for such a young poet
Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer.
thanks and best wishes,
rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the world.....to stardom..........
Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed …
I like it.. short... descriptive...
It would help me when little rocks are in my way...
I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger...
it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that
Wise wom one so young. Well done. Sue
Real inspiration Athul Krishna...well done
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