02 Inspiration

Rating: 5.0

Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!

Subbaraman N V 22 April 2008

Short and sweet with a great message! Congrats!

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Mamta Agarwal 22 April 2008

it is ashort and yery effective poem in its message.you have a talent for brevity.10 on that

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Ivor Hogg 22 April 2008

Mature thinking for such a young poet

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Melvin Banggollay 21 April 2008

Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer. thanks and best wishes, melvin

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 April 2008

rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the world.....to stardom..........

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Janri Gogeshvili 04 May 2008

Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed …

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I like it.. short... descriptive... It would help me when little rocks are in my way... I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger...

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Mamta Agarwal 23 April 2008

it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that

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Sue Crocker 22 April 2008

Wise wom one so young. Well done. Sue

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rajagopal h 22 April 2008

Real inspiration Athul Krishna...well done

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