Athul KrishnaA

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02 Inspiration - Poem by Athul KrishnaA

Rise, when time is up;
Move, with your head held high;
Struggle, struggle in times of trouble
Until you get what you desire!

Comments about 02 Inspiration by Athul KrishnaA

  • (5/4/2008 9:55:00 AM)

    Cleverly and beautifully … many older persons not can so is figurative will be expressed … (Report) Reply

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  • (4/23/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    I like it.. short... descriptive...
    It would help me when little rocks are in my way...
    I wove them over because I dont want them to get bigger...
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  • (4/23/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    it is a nice short poem.we have to face whatever challnges come our way. you have in four liness conveyed that. io for that (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    Wise wom one so young. Well done. Sue (Report) Reply

  • rajagopal h (4/22/2008 11:03:00 AM)

    Real inspiration Athul Krishna...well done (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 4:50:00 AM)

    Short and sweet with a great message! Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 3:07:00 AM)

    it is ashort and yery effective poem in its have a talent for brevity.10 on that (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    Mature thinking for such a young poet (Report) Reply

  • Melvin Banggollay (4/21/2008 11:13:00 PM)

    Short but powerful indeed. Keep penning for I can see you have the soul of a poet, a heart of a dreamer and a pen of a prolific writer.

    thanks and best wishes,
    (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/11/2008 1:40:00 AM)

    rise and rise..............till shine...........rules the stardom.......... (Report) Reply

  • Allen Steble (4/9/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    i once read somewhere that a poem with 3 great ideas should be 3 lines long, a short poem with a great message, yes life is about struggle but it is sweet when you get what you desire after you have struggled long for, and thats what makes us appreciate it, gr8 poem Athul :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008

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