4 Random Thoughts.. Poem by anais vionet

4 Random Thoughts..



(3 Haikus)

Immature - is a
word boring people use to
describe fun people.

I should start a book,
a thick notebook to keep
inappropriate thoughts.

Ever look at friends
and think, "Wow, we're gonna
be some weird adults? "

Sleep is my drug, my
bed is the dealer, my clock
the cops and school the jail.

Monday, August 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,random thoughts,teen
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
lets all just relax, ok? No pressure.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 18 August 2020

I hope in the future you really will collect a fat notebook of your aphoristic jottings. I like your quick turns of thought. In a similar aphoristic vein, I recommend the mini-poems posted on my poet page under the title SPINNING POLYHEDRAL MIRROR.

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Michael R. Burch 17 August 2020

Another interesting haiku sequence. Hopefully you can publish the thick notebook when you're of age! ; -)

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