-30 Poem by anais vionet

-30

Rating: 5.0


This morning's light seemed to blink on,
suddenly, like an urgent message.
It painted the lone, brittle cloud, racing somewhere
warmer, a shocking school-bus yellow.

There's a -30 degree wind-chill this morning,
my coffee seemed hotter and more comforting.
I usually keep my windows cracked at night
but this air feels aggressive and sharp as a knife.

The quad, usually bustling on weekend mornings,
is empty and the few cars I see are smoking like old steam trains.
I was dreaming of sweets and of walking to "Donut Crazy, "
but that actually would be crazy, if not suicidal.

"Ooo! " I say after digging through the kitchen cupboards, "we have pop-tarts! "

Wednesday, February 8, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: university,sweat,coldness,morning,teen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 February 2023

I liked the reality of this piece, setting the readers right there beside you on this frigid morning at college---top marks!

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anais vionet 08 February 2023

Thanks for commenting Susan =]

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