(4) The Wind Knows Your Name Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

(4) The Wind Knows Your Name

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Why do I run?
you ask.

It´s the distance
I want to overcome.

It´s the tension,
the way out
of the maze.

The pace,
the working heart,
the breath.

It´s the wind
which knows
your name.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 06 October 2009

The pace, the working heart, the breath. It´s the wind which knows your name. a sweet poem with new idea that, the wind knows your name is really a new meningful composition of words..giving many meanings.. romantic write and the way you express is very much melodic and heartfeeling..well done dear friend

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Yufen Liou 10 April 2009

I really don''t think the wind would know your name because no one would know how the wind feel, but then ya, it's a poem, I just think you do words well,

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Magda Graf 13 December 2007

A very evocative piece of writing, Luis.

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