Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 327 Points (Palencia-Spain)

(4) I Wish The Rain Could Speak Of You - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

I wish the rain could speak of You,
sweet sad sounds
of rain drops dripping,
but no music can help.

Memories bring back dark drops
and I see the truth no one can sing.


Comments about (4) I Wish The Rain Could Speak Of You by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • (10/12/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    Memories bring back dark drops
    and I see the truth no one can sing.

    wow its a great wish.. singing in the rhythm of rain drops.. wonderful and really a sweet romantic way of expression.. short but a very impressive and good poem..that i enjoyed alot and let me say, luis dear you are doing a great job..well done 10/10
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (10/15/2008 3:06:00 PM)

    wonderful soooooohing poem! .........10+
    really a fine piece!
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  • (9/8/2008 8:39:00 PM)

    Without hesitation, a 10. Your talent for imagery shines through.

    I can only echo Sandra's encomium. 'World Class'.

    - Will
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  • (9/30/2007 4:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful, subtle and very poignant. To give oneself away in words is the greatest gift of all. World class, Luis. One of your very best.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 30, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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