43rd Street Poem by Brian Murphy

43rd Street

Rating: 5.0


As I gaze upon the towering building,
suddenly it’s as if I’m looking down from it’s ledge.

My legs turn numb and it’s as if gravity is pulling me into a lean,
I stare at the concrete just feet from my vision.

Yet somehow I feel the hollow wind of a solitary rooftop,
the massive structures begin to bend in my direction.

A driving fear floods my body,
dizzy, confused and terrified.

Thursday, September 4, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: concrete,confused
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 05 September 2008

I've been there 43rd St., Manhattan, NY... nice city...nice descriptive verses well done... Ency Bearis

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Hockey Fan 04 September 2008

You just made people who are scared of heights...be scared of lows to :) Very good 10/10

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